"Marry a mountain girl and you marry the mountain." ~ Irish saying

Thursday, December 15, 2011

[You] Understood



You wanted More.

when it came,

it wouldn’t have you

in whole or in part

You built a ship made of glass

and set sail on a concrete sea

weeping as fragments of a dream

splintered, sliced, shredded

through illusions hand –crafted

into future ill-timed

onto shore made of sand.



You stood on shaky legs

leaking opposites and apologies

for life unlived

roads not taken

hope deferred

and you tore your shirt

the rest of the way through-

strung it as a flag

to remind you

of who you were,

the last time you set sail.





Now, your path is unfolding

ocean surging in moonlight

waves frothing, cleansing wounds

with biting, salty spray

leaving behind all

the things you thought you needed

with only a silvery moon to guide

and a dagger between your teeth

diving beneath the waves

You find

Yourself.

 
 
 
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7 smart remarks:

Brian Miller said...

wow...pretty intense Ti...the glad ship on a concrete sea is quite vivid...tearing the shirt to wave as a flag...i guess you just have to decide what you want is greater than what you leave behind

kkryno said...

Beautiful!

I need to be that brave.

PJ said...

Beautiful, haunting vision of the journey. Perfectly expressed.

Titanium said...

In case there was any doubt- this one is for my Sisters and for the strong men, the good men of this world who stand beside us, beside you. This one is for All of You. All of us. Every single one of us who's been there in every possible way.

kkryno, you are. Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear.

PJ, [understood].

Snowcatcher said...

What a journey. Leaves me out of breath just reading this. Had to read it three times to fully grasp every emotion, every stage, every triumph. Very well done. Don't think I could have strung the words so effectively.

natural redhead said...

Wow. Ouch. Beautiful, Ti.
'leaking opposites and apologies
for life unlived'

Yes!

GR said...

Whack! Slapped awake. Been "leaking apologies" for a while, mourning the shards. Thanks for the images, and the message, and watch for the shreds on the flagpole!

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