You wanted More.
when it came,
it wouldn’t have you
in whole or in part
You built a ship made of glass
and set sail on a concrete sea
weeping as fragments of a dream
splintered, sliced, shredded
through illusions hand –crafted
into future ill-timed
onto shore made of sand.
You stood on shaky legs
leaking opposites and apologies
for life unlived
roads not taken
hope deferred
and you tore your shirt
the rest of the way through-
strung it as a flag
to remind you
of who you were,
the last time you set sail.
Now, your path is unfolding
ocean surging in moonlight
waves frothing, cleansing wounds
with biting, salty spray
leaving behind all
the things you thought you needed
with only a silvery moon to guide
and a dagger between your teeth
diving beneath the waves
You find
Yourself.
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7 smart remarks:
wow...pretty intense Ti...the glad ship on a concrete sea is quite vivid...tearing the shirt to wave as a flag...i guess you just have to decide what you want is greater than what you leave behind
Beautiful!
I need to be that brave.
Beautiful, haunting vision of the journey. Perfectly expressed.
In case there was any doubt- this one is for my Sisters and for the strong men, the good men of this world who stand beside us, beside you. This one is for All of You. All of us. Every single one of us who's been there in every possible way.
kkryno, you are. Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear.
PJ, [understood].
What a journey. Leaves me out of breath just reading this. Had to read it three times to fully grasp every emotion, every stage, every triumph. Very well done. Don't think I could have strung the words so effectively.
Wow. Ouch. Beautiful, Ti.
'leaking opposites and apologies
for life unlived'
Yes!
Whack! Slapped awake. Been "leaking apologies" for a while, mourning the shards. Thanks for the images, and the message, and watch for the shreds on the flagpole!
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